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FADE IN:
EXT. CITY – Morning
A SERIES OF SHOTS
–a clogged freeway at rush hour.
–a mall parking lot, now empty, rows of space looking for vehicles.
–busy city streets. Buses, taxis.
INT. VEHICLE IN TRAFFIC HOLDING 2 OCCUPANTS (HUSBAND & WIFE) – 7:22AM
–stopped at traffic light waiting to start moving with traffic once again.
–Husband looks in rear view mirror, brushes overly long hair out of eyes and across forehead.
–Husband glances at wife and says in a overly “faux witty” voice
DIALOGUE:
–Husband: “Wow, I could be Justin Bieber with this hair!”
–Wife: “Wow…you could be Justin Bieber’s dad with that hair…”
INT. VEHICLE
–silence as car pulls away from traffic light and moves closer to downtown
–silence continues…
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“Haircut (A Silent Symphony of Scissors at Age Six” – Theodore & Edgar
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~Smansmith (husband)
Comments
3 responses to “Thursday Morning Moment: A Slowcoustic Vignette”
Oh dear. Shot down!
Crushed so to speak. Am I disappointed that I can’t be Justin Bieber? …wait, I think the bigger tragedy would be to actually be Justin Bieber’s dad…apparently.
LOL!!!!!!!!